Write a Story with Multiple Voices
Along the lines of multiple perspectives- how do you keep several distinct voices in your head? How can one author manage to write a story with multiple voices? Even if you have only 3 or 4 POV characters, you’re novel could still have a large cast. Each of those characters needs their own voice?
The first novel in my series has only 4 POV characters but has a cast of about 10. Here’s how I keep a handle on all those voices. Hope this helps you.
Personality: Has her sweet moments. She acts like a child most of the time, but has her mature moments. Hears her common sense, but doesn’t listen to it. Gets people to like her just by being herself (as long as they look past the exterior). Resilient. She doesn’t stay down, doesn’t give up. Fighter.
Inner Struggle: She’s the only half-human being in a village of full-blood beings. The villagers hate her because she’s a half-breed and because she never learned her place. She somehow got the protection of the two most popular Del’Praeli which made the villagers even angrier. They’ve made it their life mission to break her. Because of this daily onslaught, Shade has a poor self-image. She has to often hide her self-consciousness because it is a weakness.
Personality: Has little patience. Cares for no one outside of his circle. Determined, persistent. When he gets his hands on a project, something he’s passionate about, there’s little that’ll stop him from completing it. Will do what it takes to protect those he cares about. Thinks little of his own needs. Can be fairly level-headed, but Shade can drive him to see red.
Personality: Really arrogant. Believe’s he’s above everyone. A little mean. Really judgmental. Powerful though he was never one to flaunt it. Secretive- he tells people only what he believes they need to know. He doesn’t trust people and hordes information like it’s pirate gold.
Inner Struggle: He doesn’t remember his childhood but is still affected by it. He was neglected as a child and had to grow up fast because he had a little brother to take care of. He was never allowed to be a child and doesn’t know how to be one. He’s overly protective of his family. He visibly withdraws inside himself when those he cares about says something mean to him even if he knows they don’t mean it. His guardians see him only as a possession.
Personality: Likes to feel superior, but doesn’t strip others down to do so. Instead, she likes to be around people who know less than she does. She enjoys holding this knowledge over people by talking in circles. She can be calm most of the time. Extremely loyal to her family no matter how they treat her. Loves to use her power and knowledge to teach others.
Inner Struggle: Sanher, her mother, gave her the last of her dark consciousness and died because of it. Now, her father and older siblings blame Bleak for Sanher’s death. Bleak blames herself for her mother’s death.
Personality: Though he’s not the strongest, he is the family patriarch. He enjoys his roles and doesn’t like anyone else filling it. Doesn’t see the reason to use their powers for fighting. He’s brilliant at creating shields and using his power to fulfill the dark desires of humans. He doesn’t like weakness but doesn’t put others down for being weak. Instead, he simply treats them with cold disdain. He’s not a male who sits on the sidelines. Give enough time, he could think his way out of any problem or avoid it in the first place. Stubborn. He thinks he’s always right. Doesn’t like change.
Inner Struggle: He was good at protecting his family when they weren’t in any danger, but when they really needed him, his inability to use his power for things other than shielding cost him. He sees it as his life mission to solve his children’s problems. After years of protecting his family, he’s no longer needed like he used to be. He’s proud of the Tahylur name and doesn’t like it that his grandson doesn’t call himself Tahylur. He wants to go back to the days when the family revolved around him.