William Estes asked “How much detail do you have to put into locations that your characters only hear about? “
For this post, details doesn’t always mean what you put in the story. Sometimes you create background information to help you picture a location. Most of that information never gets into the book.
In the Merging World Series, my characters hear a lot about this city called Denont. This place is causing them a lot of problem. Generally, most of the characters who visit it hate everyone who lives there. During the story, only one character actually goes there. Because Denont is important, I developed its culture to show why the characters hate it. I created the location’s history to understand why the place is causing problems. Denont has a major port. Guns used to come in through that port from Sorin. Denont leaders made deals with Sorin to get some gun “under the table.” Because of this, when the world ends, certain Denont residents have enough weapons to take over the country.
There’s also a place called Keep Tryst in my series. Certain characters never visit it but they hear about it often because the residents are experts at mixing medical herbs. Keep Tryst is located in the mountains which means it’s difficult for most travelers to reach them. They get their herbs into different villages through one person. That’s the only details I put into this location until a character visits it.
I world build as I write which means I only created details needed at that point in the story. If, while I’m writing, I realize a location is becoming important, then I step back and develop it enough that I can move the story along.
Think of locations as characters. A person learns another character is good at repairing buildings. That may be all the details you need if the person doesn’t think the character is important and never actually meets them. There may be a corrupt leader of the village the person lives in. The person never meets this leader but they know all about their personality, their appearance, their family background, where they live, why they’re corrupt…everything.
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